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 | September 13th, 2007 at 01:01am Um, I was bored, and turned on the tv to find that House was on. It is one of my favorite shows. And while watching it, I started to think of this poem to write. So, this ended up being the outcome. Its not that long, and its not all that great. But, please tell me what you think?..=]...
House M.D.
Sarcastic with a scratchy voice
Self harm influenced with a cane
Gray pools of blue for eyes
Silver streaking through his hair
Another life being saved
Without a care towards the world.
Smarts beyond the years that’s passed
Drugs secretly popped
Another sip of strong coffee
And now ready to go again.
Bossy to the extreme
Secretly warmed hearted inside
Rarely show;
Its better off that way
Character is something to keep.
White board, black marker
Possibilities never endless
Tell the victims with their problems
Another life will be saved.
I wonder how he sleeps at night.p |
paper heart.
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 | September 15th, 2007 at 03:52pm i love this one
it captures the essence of House so well
you deserve a pat on the back for that 
omg i miss house tho :[ |
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| September 15th, 2007 at 11:50pm Thank-you..X]..
And, I miss it too.
But, I heard its coming back soon.. .. |
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Posts: 42 | September 21st, 2007 at 02:29am it started off VERY strong. lol.
from there twas good, but not *great*, but zomglol i so fell for the line "white board black marker" (skipping to..) "tell the victims with their problems".
loved it. ^_^ |
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| September 22nd, 2007 at 01:58am Thanks..X]... |
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| September 22nd, 2007 at 04:55pm Oh, nice. |
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| September 23rd, 2007 at 12:25am Thank-you..X]... |
