Hearttickler.

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miau
King For A Couple Of Days
miau
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4469
November 17th, 2007 at 02:32pm
Hearttickler
A hearttickler, gigglemaker,
Sweetest person, eyes-up-lighter,
My most favourite swordplay fighter,
My lucky charm, sorrowtaker.

I smile when I think of your beautiful soul,
You funny lad, most childish boy,
And so you fill me up with joy,
You make me feel happy, alive, content, whole. *

Happinessbringer, fireplacesinger,
Every wotrd you say will linger
In my ears, my mind, my heart,
I'll just sit and thank our Lord

For letting us meet and spend some time,
For giggles and laughter in glowstick shine,
For cheery chatter while doing the dishes
And hat sales in France and shooting star wishes.


*: I'm not really happy with that line. Any suggestions to make it better?

I'm posting this again because I'm looking for some constructive criticism (and of course also for some more compliments. Meg)

Ivana, thanks for your comment, it was very sweet. Kiss
rollerpig
GSBitch
rollerpig
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283
November 20th, 2007 at 07:06pm
that's cute. =D
miau
King For A Couple Of Days
miau
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4469
November 26th, 2007 at 06:40pm
tehe
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