Paradise (working title)

This is a work in progress which I started today...had a couple of lines formulating in my head so I jotted them down and started working verses around them. Feedback/constructive criticism appreciated...

What you say is a lie
Couldn't be more real
It's still here for you to see,
To taste and to feel.
Just 'cause you have your doubts
Doesn't mean it's the end.
I'm keeping it safe
Until you believe again.

I know how it feels
When you seem so lost
Blinded by the rain
And the bitter frost
It's hard to catch the sun
When everything looks grey
But when your skies are clear
Then you'll find your way

As close as I get,
Nothing else is the same.
I'm in the darkness
Calling out your name.
Come and knock on my door
Or pick up the phone
Paradise is waiting
For you to come home.