Rate the poem I wrote for my girlfriend a while back please =]

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Mareh
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Mareh
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April 23rd, 2008 at 11:27am
i love you skie you're a beautiful girl,
i think you're the best in the whole wide world.
you're awesome, the best friend someone could have
and i wish i could give you all that i had.
you deserve someone special and he'll be lucky to have you
cause no one on the world can come close to being as good as you
i wish you were happy and i could hold you tight,
and hug and kiss you all through the night.
i love you to bits, skie, you're simply the best
and i'll always choose you over all of the rest. xxx

It's not done in proper grammar and stuff cause I copy/pasted from an MSN convo.
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May 17th, 2008 at 09:07pm
cute.
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