Joel McHale.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 3974
 | May 14th, 2008 at 08:52pm My poems are always so short D= This one seems rather unfinished but I don't know where to go with it .
I will always stand by you,
And I’ll be there to fight for you
I’ll be there for you, through thick and thin
Rain or snow, I’ll start when the day begins,
And I’ll never cease, to be there,
So I can see your smiling face just tell me where.
Don’t ever leave, don’t walk away
Though you know I’ll wait for you day after day. |
yellowstickerface
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 195 | May 20th, 2008 at 06:47am Nice work.
If you replaced the line "so i can see your smiling face just me where"
It would make a nice pop-punk song.
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