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Tragic Jaren Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 1762	May 14th, 2008 at 11:35pm branded through combustion, sometimes i think you use words that you don't actually know, but beauty is so easy to mark through your dialogue. you've got your melody twisted through your monotone like suffocating overgrown weeds. you blend together what should be so difficult to distinguish. your thoughts crash in between what would be a casual stutter. so quickly and quietly you pick it up, and manipulate what could have ruined another realistic idea of you.
Jesse Lacey Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946	May 15th, 2008 at 07:56pm Jaren, that's REALLY good. And I'm not just saying that, I mean it. It's really good. Though I don't understand it, I think that's when poetry is best. When there isn't a clear definition of what the poem is about. I love it. + You have a wide use of vocabulary words.

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Tragic Jaren
Jackass

Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 1762

May 14th, 2008 at 11:35pm

branded through combustion, sometimes i think you use words
that you don't actually know,
but beauty is so easy to mark through your dialogue.

you've got your melody twisted through your monotone
like suffocating overgrown weeds.
you blend together what should be so difficult to distinguish.

your thoughts crash in between what would be a casual stutter.
so quickly and quietly you pick it up,
and manipulate what could have ruined another realistic idea of you.

Jesse Lacey
Post Whore

Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23946

May 15th, 2008 at 07:56pm

Jaren, that's REALLY good.
And I'm not just saying that, I mean it.
It's really good.
Though I don't understand it, I think that's when poetry is best.
When there isn't a clear definition of what the poem is about.

I love it. Smile

+ You have a wide use of vocabulary words.

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