just.listen.

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anarchyXtiger
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
anarchyXtiger
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4
July 11th, 2008 at 11:42pm
kay so...i just wrote this thing..and i can't decide if i like it or not. so...opinions?--

say good-bye,,
here's one more try
baby how do i know if you'll stay mine?

you said it yourself; we're not alone
and you can do so much more
you've got the chance,, how do i know you wont take it?

i havn't lied yet,, i told you i couldn't be your everything
but i said i'd try
and i'm trying,, more then i've ever cared to try for anything.
is it good enough?
i don't think it is.

and honey i- i can see it in your eyes
you want to make me cry
and you can't help but smile,
could we just sit for a while?
i want to hear your heart beat
before it breaks apart

hasn't anyone told you?
hearts are meant to be broken
and yes,, it's meant to hurt.

but you can't stop your heart from beating
you can't stop yourself from falling

Xxwho does you're heart scream for?xX

follow me
i'll take us away.
away from the pain
we'll clear a path
and it can close behind us
so no one follows
and we can be alone
and start a life
hidden by the stars,,
just make a wish...

but wishes don't come true
and sweety,, i wish for you.
will you be the exception?
stay in my life..
we can clear through this strife
just take my hand
guide me through
i can't find my way out alone
Xi need youX

and i'll never admit it
but you're the one i've cared for the most
and lied to the least.

and i can't fall for anyone,,
there's a rope around my throat
but maybe if you catch me; before i hit the ground
you could be the one to cut me down
to save me
protect me
or destroy me
i'll risk the fall
just say three words;
'ready, set, go'?
oh, no.
Xxi love you...xX
droid.
King For A Couple Of Days
droid.
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Gender: Male
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Mibba
July 12th, 2008 at 12:19am
I think this should go in the poetry subforum.
anarchyXtiger
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
anarchyXtiger
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4
July 12th, 2008 at 12:22am
i didn't know there was one O.o
hah sorry i dont come on here much
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