At this Velocity, We'll Make Patterns on Windshields
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| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2921  | Dare I say it, but I think my writer's block could possibly be coming to an end? This whole thing is one giant metaphor, but I suppose you could read it either way. Let me know what you think!  At This Velocity, We’ll Make Patterns on Windshields A pattern stitched across the windshield; The spider’s craft has been outmatched, By the velocity poured into this collision. If the allure created by this double concussion Could spark anything more dazzling than the Colours within these obscured, muffled thoughts, My wounds would flow straight into my eyes. There is nothing so auroral such as the luminous Rays that spew forth from the headlights. But strapped down in place by this seatbelt, All that crosses my mind is your safety. The sight of your body being lifted from Its position draped over the steering wheel Incites the image of a photo album, and I’m Sifting through the sheets of pictures, memories. I struggle to assist them, as they relocate My stationary form, though no matter how Earnestly I try, my limbs will not shift. It is not conceivable, but as I gradually come To grasp the reason for which my ears Do not pick up any sound, a crisp blanket Is drawn over my face, blinding me forever. |
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| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Thank you guys.  for you all! |
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| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Thank youuuu. |
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| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Aww, thanks.  |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | [Flawless Error]:You're welcome! |
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| °MorbidRose° Jackass Age: 16 Gender: Female Posts: 1723 | Loved it. It was amazing. [Off topic, but I love your avatar. Final Fantasy VII rocks, as does Cloud.  ] |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 20 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Here I go again The flow is good. The metaphors are brilliant. Great choice of words. Good structure. Amazing |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 17 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Thank you guys. That means a lot. MorbidRose:Yes, FF7 is the bomb. |
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