AMERICAN IDIOT: The Jesus Of Suburbia

Hey Everyone Like i mentioned befor on other threads (If you have seen my posts) Um I have writen a story based on the Jesus of Saburbia guy (character if you will) Really it gets more into ALOWT of his life and his relationship with "Whatsurname" also ALL the shite he's been threw, and i thought that i should share it with u....I mean my edditor (*COLF...My english Teacher) has just finnished edditing it and he (A BIG fan of Green Day since i was in dipers) thought it was kool and i was thinking i want other peoples oppinions of the story!!! I will be posting it soon....In my journal , and also like i mentioned befor for the lazy people that are was to lazy to drag thier mouse to find my journal i will provide a link HERE in this very thred!! Also since my book is 565 pages long I thought it whould be best if I posted an "Illabrite Chuck" to keep you guys wanting more! Every Week.....I seriousely want to know what you think of it!!! PLZ don't bash it to hard if u don't like it! i know there are alowt of Critics here...... SO yeah cheak regularly to this tread if u want a good story and untill then this story is:

COMMING SOON!

vasco:

Hey Everyone Like i mentioned befor on other threads (If you have seen my posts) Um I have writen a story based on the Jesus of Saburbia guy (character if you will) Really it gets more into ALOWT of his life and his relationship with "Whatsurname" also ALL the shite he's been threw, and i thought that i should share it with u....I mean my edditor (*COLF...My english Teacher) has just finnished edditing it and he (A BIG fan of Green Day since i was in dipers) thought it was kool and i was thinking i want other peoples oppinions of the story!!! I will be posting it soon....In my journal , and also like i mentioned befor for the lazy people that are was to lazy to drag thier mouse to find my journal i will provide a link HERE in this very thred!! Also since my book is 565 pages long I thought it whould be best if I posted an "Illabrite Chuck" to keep you guys wanting more! Every Week.....I seriousely want to know what you think of it!!! PLZ don't bash it to hard if u don't like it! i know there are alowt of Critics here...... SO yeah cheak regularly to this tread if u want a good story and untill then this story is:

COMMING SOON!

Hi, I just thought I should tell you that Suburbia is spelt Suburbia and not Saburbia.

Thanks i usually spell things wrong when I'm typing fast at school so that my teacher dosen't catch me not doing my work HE HE!!!.....Um so yeah!! come back soon thanks!

vasco:

Thanks i usually spell things wrong when I'm typing fast at school so that my teacher dosen't catch me not doing my work HE HE!!!.....Um so yeah!! come back soon thanks!

That's okay, I'll fix it

THANX Nice to know that people have my back on these things! Lanywaz I will post the first chapter for my story this SUNDAY! come back soon! I promiss u won't regret it~

Can someone spark a conversation about maybe whats the story going to be like! Or SOMETHING I'm Bord out of my mind and the story is comming out THIS SUNDAY! and i don't even think u guys will think much out of it. (this is sad)

Well everyone I did it it's posted and already TWO secends after i wrote it people where already leaving comments LOl SO without a due here is the first half of the book and i hope u guys like it tell me what u think on THIS thread plz!.....



HERE'S THE LINK! ENJOY

what do u guys think?