davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | April 12th, 2006 at 09:22pm Yes...it's meh new story.
Go ahead, read.
You might already be reading it though....it's short, but sweet. More'll be on the way soon.  |
greendayfrv0 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 5 | April 14th, 2006 at 11:44pm u need 2 make it longer but 4 a start it was ok |
SmellOfRegret93 Geek
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 127 | April 23rd, 2006 at 01:21pm I just read the four chapters you have so far. You're a great writer, and you and the story have a lot of potential. There's not many stories on GSB worth reading anymore, but I'll definetely keep up with yours. I look forward to reading more of your story.
Keep writing sweetheart! |
skittelzster Geek
 Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 266 | April 24th, 2006 at 02:44pm Not a bad story I likes it! he he ! AND its "ohh soo very dirty!..." :p |
TresFine King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 39 Gender: Female Posts: 2448 | April 24th, 2006 at 03:30pm sure whats it about |
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | April 26th, 2006 at 05:44pm heartgrenade:There's not many stories on GSB worth reading anymore.
Yeah. Most stories I try to read have no plot. And has everyone forgotten about constructive CRITICISM? People rate 10s when it's not worth a ten.  |
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | April 26th, 2006 at 05:46pm greendayfrv0:u need 2 make it longer but 4 a start it was ok
There's 4 parts now. Much longer than the first. |