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Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
  | April 16th, 2006 at 12:33am Okay, so this will not be my best. It's basicly one big metaphore grouped into a few smaller one. Sooo... yeah.
I heard you silently whisper
that you would never leave.
Opening my eyes I realized
that you were never there.
So I ran.
Over space and time I flew.
Moments streached to months
as the years passed, still searching
for that space in your heart I once was.
Here comes the rain.
Lost in a cloud as vast as my imagination.
Looking for you where angels soar, Nothing.
The messages I recieved from you I put on show
for all to see, written horizontaly accross my wrists.
It wasn't sagacious, but I was proud to say
I had a reason for my misery and bliss.
To the grave yard.
Wandering for what seemed like forever,
2920 exasperating days. Eight long, long years.
I resent the day I heard you whisper,
ever taking your messages to heart. You just aren't there.
I have enough strength for one last letter.
I'd do anything to get you out of my head.
The gun evaporates to nothing in my hand.
My eyes flutter closed as a chill wind blows
followed by fingers slowly interlocking with mine.
I felt your heart beat, and a tender kiss to my lips,
forever to linger. This is the nightmare I had been waiting for.
Falling asleep in your arms, I wake only to realize.....
that you were never there. |
Tahm York
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 31394
| April 16th, 2006 at 12:44am O_O |
keasbey
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3660 | April 16th, 2006 at 12:55am Hannah/ That's the most beautiful fucking thing on the earth. |
Ruby Soho
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 465 | April 16th, 2006 at 02:07am I love it.  |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| April 16th, 2006 at 02:38am Wow... |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| April 16th, 2006 at 02:50am That good? pahshaa. |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| April 16th, 2006 at 02:51am (Self Inflicted Coma):That good? pahshaa. Accept the compliments! If it's good, be proud of yourself! If it's not so good, use the constructive critisism to make your next poem even better!
(And by the way, it was fucking good!) |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| April 16th, 2006 at 02:58am Saint of Denial:(Self Inflicted Coma):That good? pahshaa. Accept the compliments! If it's good, be proud of yourself! If it's not so good, use the constructive critisism to make your next poem even better!
(And by the way, it was fucking good!) Eutgh, thanks I suppose. I'm not good at taking compliments. It makes me feel dumb. Weird, right? Yeah. Thanks. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| April 16th, 2006 at 10:17am Nice job.  |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| April 16th, 2006 at 07:16pm I fixed the typos and the flow. o_____o |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| April 16th, 2006 at 07:23pm It's awesome |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | April 16th, 2006 at 07:57pm Joan the Kitten =^_^=:It's awesome It's beyond awesome! |
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206 | April 16th, 2006 at 08:16pm I like it! Good job.  |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| April 17th, 2006 at 06:49am I love it! It's...different. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| April 17th, 2006 at 08:08am That was really good |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | April 17th, 2006 at 11:00am That was beautiful It was so beautiful... |
Faggot™
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1526 | April 18th, 2006 at 10:02pm uhhhm.... |
Beautiful_Imperfection
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 273 | April 20th, 2006 at 12:13pm i love it *thumbs up* |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | Don'tReviveOldThreadsPlz. |
killing loneliness
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 572 | it's very very horribly good..i love it..it's soo gloomy..love it:d |
