Cosmetic vanity.

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Matt Smith Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 31134	May 4th, 2006 at 11:48am It rhymes, I'm sorry. x_x We are reduced to kohl rimmed eyes, Nervous whispers, glossed smiles, Visions of glamour Stark insecurities Languishing beneath mascara skies A powder façade, to hide our scars, Lipstick lust and kerosene And it’s just another reminder, Of plastic vanity, Who we are Our dissatisfaction And who we long to be. Feedback is really appreciated.
Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1315	May 4th, 2006 at 11:49am NICE Meg..... ...got talent there girl S.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 4th, 2006 at 11:50am It was nice. lol I know that sounds dumb but it was. It was short and rhymed and all... so it was nice.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 4th, 2006 at 11:51am ^ sums it up great. I love it. It's sweet, but kind of sinister as well.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 4th, 2006 at 01:34pm Wow. I really really really like that.
killing loneliness Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 572	May 4th, 2006 at 02:19pm yeah...i agree with Ellen. it's sweet and pretty. and it has a sinister shadow to it aswell...nice.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 4th, 2006 at 04:07pm I really like that.
Matt Smith Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 31134	May 5th, 2006 at 11:15am Thanks for your comments, people.
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 6th, 2006 at 10:00pm thats cool i really like that xxxwell donexx
Ruby Soho Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 465	May 6th, 2006 at 10:27pm [Flawless Error]: I really like that.
xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186	May 7th, 2006 at 02:37am 4 out of 5 thumbs up
Zoie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 6370	May 7th, 2006 at 02:44am That's great. Awsome job.
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727	May 7th, 2006 at 02:47am punk_rock_fan_1988: 4 out of 5 thumbs up Rhyming isn't a terrible thing, either.
xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186	May 7th, 2006 at 02:55am the point of quoting that was?

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