fakeing a smile

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King For A Couple Of Days
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May 6th, 2006 at 12:39pm
how does it feel to know your living a lie
all the people that suround you just fakeing a smile
his kiss on your lips and his heart in his pants
he was so good at what he called romance
he told me he loved me and that we would go far
no matter if we were apart

they said they'd always care
and teach me all i lack
then they walked away
and laughed behind my back
i was a fool to believe i was there friend
i believed them when they said theyd
be here untill the end


how does it feel to see the love of your life just leave
come back to reality and realise that it was all make belive
he isnt coming back for me
i fell so easily for his charm
but it was just another broken heart
just another mistake
another dosefull of pain

how does it feel to know your living a lie
all the people that suround you just fakeing a smile
how does it feel to know your the one that makes me cry
all the scars and the tears and the broken hearts
was it worth all the pain and the hurt
to still love you is suicide to my heart

how does it feel to know these are your last breaths
your bleeding on the floor a thousand tear drops
how does it feel to realise this is the end of the book
the fairy tale has come to and end
theres no more pain to hide from your friends
how does it feel now everyone knows
you were just living a lie
trying your best to fake a smile
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May 6th, 2006 at 12:42pm
Omg dude that is fuking awsome Kiss u brought a tear to my eye Sad
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May 6th, 2006 at 01:44pm
thanks xx
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May 6th, 2006 at 03:12pm
Sophie my dear, your poetry has grown from fantastic and beautiful, to absolutely stunning. Out of the many I have read, this is definitely one of your best. I'm so sorry for everything you feel. But I'm here if you need to talk. Or just need someone to rant to. This was amazing, and I'm teary now. Thanks a lot. Retard

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May 6th, 2006 at 03:33pm
Your very talented.
The poem is awesome.
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May 6th, 2006 at 03:34pm
rawwwwwwwwwwwwr thank you hunnie
xxx im feeling alright now i was just a bit screwed up with my feelings stuff with my mates and just meh other stuff but me be ok now all happy and looking forward to tomorow seeing my mates yeyness xxx missing talking to you on msn hunnie
i got a new one by teh way tis
teh-spoon@hotmail.co.uk

xx love ya hunxx
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May 6th, 2006 at 03:59pm
Wow, that's amazing, as usual.
I haven't been on in so long. I just want to read poems by some familiar peot's. I love your stuff always.

I loved this line: to still love you is suicide to my heart.

<3 Sandy
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May 6th, 2006 at 07:52pm
°MorbidRose°:
Wow, that's amazing, as usual.
I haven't been on in so long. I just want to read poems by some familiar peot's. I love your stuff always.

I loved this line: to still love you is suicide to my heart.

<3 Sandy


ah i love that line wat a shame i didnt write that line
i was stuck for something to put and my friend kimmie helped me out love ya lots kimmie <3

and everyone else love ya loads <3
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May 6th, 2006 at 09:59pm
meh tis is mi poem but Sad iv screwed up my acount and cant get back onto it so had to register again xx
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May 6th, 2006 at 10:24pm
It was great, except for the many spelling errors.
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May 6th, 2006 at 10:25pm
ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry

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May 6th, 2006 at 10:28pm
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It was great, except for the many spelling errors.
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May 6th, 2006 at 10:38pm
teh-spoon:
ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry

xxxx


It's okay. It was a great poem anyway. Very Happy
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May 6th, 2006 at 10:47pm
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teh-spoon:
ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry

xxxx


It's okay. It was a great poem anyway. Very Happy
thanks xx for the next time i write a poem ill try my best to remeber to go through it and correct all the spelling xx just for you Very Happyxx
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May 7th, 2006 at 02:36am
good going..........

do u like atreyu then?
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May 7th, 2006 at 08:39am
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good going..........

do u like atreyu then?
er thanks ..and aint really heard any music but atreyu :S
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May 8th, 2006 at 04:43pm
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May 8th, 2006 at 09:37pm
teh-spoon:
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teh-spoon:
ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry

xxxx


It's okay. It was a great poem anyway. Very Happy
thanks xx for the next time i write a poem ill try my best to remeber to go through it and correct all the spelling xx just for you Very Happyxx


Haha, thanks. Laughing
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