lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
  | This called Stop. Read it.
Stop doubting yourself
Stop doting on others
Stop fishing for praise
And pretending to blubber
Stop writing and posting
Then acting a fool
Insulting yourself
Does not make you "cool".
Stop whining and wasting
Withering away
If you like what you do
You need no one to say
"I love your work"
"I worship your ground."
"I don't know what I'd do"
"If you weren't around"
Stop being impatient
The fruit will come.
Stop wondering when
Just live
Live and love.
This is like, a message to poetry posters. People want opinions on their poetry, understandable. But when no one comments, they just go "oh, I get it, you don't like me..." and shit. And using that ,they wait for someone to say "oh, i love it! don't be so negative". Or they say it in the title "it sucks but im posting it" and then complain when no one reads it. duh. who would read something if the author himself thinks its sucks? Honestly people. Live, let live, and love. peace. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| Awesome poem
Makes sense too  |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| The structure, or well, basically the whole poem isn’t good at all but the message is brilliant.
You put it across in a simple understandable way and that has its advantages too. 
Good job. |
