Poem-Stop

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lyrical_mess
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lyrical_mess
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278

Mibba Blog
May 9th, 2006 at 08:21am
This called Stop. Read it.


Stop doubting yourself
Stop doting on others
Stop fishing for praise
And pretending to blubber

Stop writing and posting
Then acting a fool
Insulting yourself
Does not make you "cool".

Stop whining and wasting
Withering away
If you like what you do
You need no one to say
"I love your work"
"I worship your ground."
"I don't know what I'd do"
"If you weren't around"

Stop being impatient
The fruit will come.
Stop wondering when
Just live
Live and love.


This is like, a message to poetry posters. People want opinions on their poetry, understandable. But when no one comments, they just go "oh, I get it, you don't like me..." and shit. And using that ,they wait for someone to say "oh, i love it! don't be so negative". Or they say it in the title "it sucks but im posting it" and then complain when no one reads it. duh. who would read something if the author himself thinks its sucks? Honestly people. Live, let live, and love. peace.
The Doctor
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The Doctor
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Mibba Blog
May 9th, 2006 at 08:22am
Awesome poem

Makes sense too Smile
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
What's in a name?
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451

Mibba
May 9th, 2006 at 09:06am
The structure, or well, basically the whole poem isn’t good at all but the message is brilliant.
You put it across in a simple understandable way and that has its advantages too. Wink
Good job.
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