everything seemed so perfect (short)

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teh-spoon
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teh-spoon
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May 9th, 2006 at 12:49pm
the tears still roll down her face
everything seemed so perfect
everything felt so right
and here she lies tonight
bleeding on the floor
underneath the stars
the blood stained knife lyes in her arms

this is shot meh
paper shoes
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paper shoes
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May 9th, 2006 at 05:45pm
I like it.
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 9th, 2006 at 06:27pm
It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times.
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May 9th, 2006 at 06:28pm
Ella:
It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times.
Wow, that's an awesome way how to encourage the author.
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 9th, 2006 at 06:28pm
Harlequin Girl:
Ella:
It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times.
Wow, that's an awesome way how to encourage the author.

I'm just brutally honest.
teh-spoon
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teh-spoon
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May 10th, 2006 at 04:32am
and honesty is appriciated
it did suck
and has been done about
34095744395793046 times.

but iv also written like 100 poems so i kinda
have ran out of stuff to say in them
iv came across writters block again
ill go write more when the feeling comes to me
and work on it before i post
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 04:39am
teh-spoon:
and honesty is appriciated
it did suck
and has been done about
34095744395793046 times.

but iv also written like 100 poems so i kinda
have ran out of stuff to say in them
iv came across writters block again
ill go write more when the feeling comes to me
and work on it before i post

I appreciate that. I hope that next time you will share something better Wink
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