imtwasidwelya Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357 | My heart pours out in this freezing rain
crying madly again and again
it's only as strong as it's weakest link
my love pours down a kitchen sink
That used to be my life
I no longer feel that knife
the edge has lost its sharpness
I am so stupid
for being torn apart by cupid
not free now
can't speak now
and so weak now |
OMG, Shoes. Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 332 | Nicely Done.  |
hidude10 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 73 | That was really cool.
Not totally sure what it was talking about, but I like alot of the phases in it. |
OMG, Shoes. Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 332 | What inspired this poem? |
imtwasidwelya Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357 | Heartache and not being able to talk about it. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 10th, 2006 at 04:10am Forced. |
imtwasidwelya Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357 | May 10th, 2006 at 04:52am It started as my lyrics but I turned it into a poem and changed it from being suicidal to something different. |