My poem/ Song

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Mrs. Lee
Jackass
Mrs. Lee
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 07:31am
You went away, and it wasn't all that great.
The words that i say,
You got hurt and so did I.
I thought we would run away, But that was in the day,
That i said good bye.

You close the door, and there wasn't anymore.
I have your things,
and you have mine.
Was it right?
To say good bye. Or was it, was it just a lie.

Say I, I don't know when the time will go by.
I regret, i regret. The things, the things i blew, just blew away.
Far away, blew away. Close the door.

You close the door, and there wasn't anymore.
I have your things,
and you have mine.
Was it right?
To say good bye. Or was it, was it just a lie.

I still miss you..

But it was better off this way.

I don't know what to call it?
I think i might call it. "Better off"
What do you think?
clark
GSBitch
clark
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047
May 10th, 2006 at 07:33am
I love it Cookie ^___^
You should write more Very Happy

And I hope thing get better for you
dead romance
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
dead romance
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May 10th, 2006 at 07:34am
its really good i like "better off" cool name
Mrs. Lee
Jackass
Mrs. Lee
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 07:34am
I hope so too, she really was my best friend..Now she is gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REGRETS REGRETS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks! Very Happy
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