I don't know why I attemp to write because I KNOW i'm uber-bad but anyways......
Drink my blood,
And I’ll drink yours.
We’ll torture and kill,
Whatever the cause.
To take a life,
To save a soul.
To take a life,
To make a whole.
Unforgivable sins can never be forgotten,
Go back where you came from, your soul is rotten.
We have perished,
For our sins.
In the end,
No one wins.
To risk all health,
To save another.
Your cause is lost,
Why even bother?
Unforgivable sins can never be forgotten,
Go back where you came from, your soul is rotten.
We’ve lost all hope,
We’re inhumane.
Lurking in the shadows,
Labelled as insane.
To be stereotyped,
To be discriminated.
To worship evil,
To be forever hated.
Unforgivable sins can never be forgotten,
Go back where you came from, your soul is rotten.
One last chance,
To make us right.
One last chance,
All others despite.
To wish that you could go back,
To hate what you’ve become.
To fear dawn,
To fear the rising sun.
Unforgivable sins can never be forgotten,
Go back where you came from, your soul is rotten.
Wow, I think you have alot of potential. you used words I don't always hear, then you had some I hear all the time, but it was actually pretty good. I'd love to read more of your work.
thankyou you've made my day better 
