thoughtfull1278
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Posts: 4 | May 10th, 2006 at 05:17pm Toughts of him
Invading her mind
Past everything
His face
His close
His words
Haunting her
Forcing her
Betraing her
Weakening her
Conrtoling
So Powerfull
So Iresistable
So right
So wrong
I kno I'm not that good but i just wanted to see how bad i was plez give me feedback to help me out! |
Tahm York
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 | May 10th, 2006 at 05:24pm you spelled thoughts wrong |
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Posts: 78 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:09am close? you mean clothes? probly not. oh well. i like short sentences. they make me feel anxious. cuz i read it fast. like a fast heartbeat... o_O |
thoughtfull1278
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Posts: 4 | May 11th, 2006 at 04:57pm I make a lot of spelling mistakes!!! oh well but yea i did mean clothes haha i suck at spelling |
