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Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | May 10th, 2006 at 02:28pm I don't really know how to explain this one.
He's her patron saint of soft affection;
a mortal poet and great romantic.
Her shimmering wings are inspiration,
to a fizzy soul and hive of lyrics
as pure as pearls are silk. Her gentle touch
against his faded, sickly flesh helps heal
his broken eyes; reverse what was too much.
Only baby doll emotions can steal
dark magic away from the heart and bring
back content faerie tales. A kiss of life
and a few doting words can soothe feeling
back to her magically drenched veins. Sharp, knifed
aggression of violent spells; mysteries
of mythology are to sick to see... |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 10th, 2006 at 03:00pm ¡Ay mi Dios! ¡Qué bonito!  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 10th, 2006 at 03:10pm Awww that's sweet. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 10th, 2006 at 03:11pm I love it sooooo much.  |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 10th, 2006 at 03:37pm Oh my.
That was so so so so sweet. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 10th, 2006 at 04:04pm What's in a name?:I love it sooooo much.  |
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | May 10th, 2006 at 05:09pm snowcherry:Oh my.
That was so so so so sweet. <33infinity x1  |
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727 | May 11th, 2006 at 12:39am Wow. That was moving, honestly. Well done! Very confusing, but I like when poems or songs are like that. I like to think about the point.  Again, well done. |
killing loneliness Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 572 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:02am damn do i love your sonnets...it's soooooo...what did my frienc all this typev of poetry? oh yeah, dead romantic writing suffocatingly beautiful poetry. |
killing loneliness Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 572 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:03am killing loneliness:damn do i love your sonnets...it's soooooo...what did my frienc all this typev of poetry? oh yeah, dead romantic writing suffocatingly beautiful poetry.
love it...don't mind the typos... |
[placebo] Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
![[placebo]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: - Gender: - Posts: 78 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:06am i liked it. =] |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | May 11th, 2006 at 10:53am Basket*Case:Wow. That was moving, honestly. Well done! Very confusing, but I like when poems or songs are like that. I like to think about the point.  Again, well done.
I guess I should've explained it, really. I write a lot of fantasy, and it was supposed to be a young couple trying to reassure one another after being poisoned by dark magic... it's all very confusing, so don't worry  Just the way I like it.
Thank you, angels. |
MistressDoom Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 108 | May 12th, 2006 at 03:42am *claps loudly*
VERY VERY VERY GOOD! |