Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:43pm I like how God hasn't wasted his colors
but simply gave you black eyes
so that you hide under the ice
and wallow without others' sympathy
to melt you down
maybe if I were close enough
I'd see a gold that washes away
the simplicities of the sea's reflections
and I'd know that he hasn't granted you so
with colors in your eyes to echo your soul
or maybe I am wrong
the mask you wear upon your hollow face
can only but warn me
to trace my gentle footsteps back into time
for the Nothing in your eyes may seep into mine
and then I too shall be
a masquerade
upon the world
to scorn
with unknowing eyes |
Lor
Geek
Age: 83
Gender: Female
Posts: 476
 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:45pm That is so pro! |
KayCool123
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 147 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:53pm GREAT!! |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:55pm I really really like that.  Especially the whole first stanza; it was quite clever. |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:36pm I like it. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 12th, 2006 at 05:35am I love that. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 12th, 2006 at 05:47am Vita-Koolaid:I like it. |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:08am It's amazing. I love it |
