thoughtfull1278
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 4 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:03pm Everything stops
Stops
Stops forever
Everything Locks
Locks
Locks forever
Everythings Lost
Lost
Lost forever
Stops, Locks, Lost
A few words
Stops, Locks, Lost
A couple movements
Stops, Locks, Lost
One Boy
Stops, Locks, Lost
Forever
I don't think this is my best poem, but I'll let you decide. |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
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Posts: 23279 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:37pm I appreciate intricit detail in poems or good descriptions so your poem isn't really my taste. |
thoughtfull1278
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 4 | May 12th, 2006 at 04:23pm oh thats okay i told you it wasn't my favorite poem either |
Spirit Of '77
Falling In Love With The Board
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Posts: 5024 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:48pm that was utterly stupid. |
