Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 86
Gender: Female
Posts: 5844
 | May 13th, 2006 at 06:35am My heart is forcing me to choose,
One of the two people I love most.
It doesn't understand how hard it is,
When you don't want to let the other go.
I can't stand to watch one's face fall,
As I call out the others name,
Because I know that I'd be causing them,
Hurt like I couldn't imagine.
I couldn't stand to see the sight,
Of one's tears falling,
As I embrace the other,
With loving passion.
It would hurt too much to know,
That I'd be the one,
That they'd remember,
Who'd broken their heart.
I can't choose one over the other,
Because I can't stand to see the other one go.
My heart is torn,
Between the two people I love most,
And it always will be.
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Don't ask..... |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | May 13th, 2006 at 07:04am That is somewhat unoriginal.
Try using some metaphores.
I think you have some potential, keep trying.  |
killing loneliness
Idiot
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Posts: 572 | May 13th, 2006 at 02:56pm it's really good...i spy with my little eye something called talent. |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 86
Gender: Female
Posts: 5844
| May 13th, 2006 at 11:34pm killing loneliness:it's really good...i spy with my little eye something called talent.
=]
lol
Thank you. |
