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Mrs. Lee Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1428	May 13th, 2006 at 06:17am The rights of Cali. The light on my cigarette burns away fast. I look up to the cloudy mist, and try to see the stars, That feeling comes of tomorrow, i wish the time would go by.. So i close my eyes and try to think of the words that might come by. A shoke runs down my spine, as i go of into my own place. There i'll find it, after my eyes have closed. Away from glenroi heights.. I sit back and let it take me away, that feeling of being far from here.. Yet again, it starts to wear off. That feeling that i love so much, now seems to far away. Will i find it? Will i be there? And now it's found..I'm back again. Just for the day. So i close my eyes and try to think of the words that might come by. A shoke runs down my spine, as i go of into my own place. There i'll find it, after my eyes have closed. Away from glenroi heights.. All the thoughts are clearing up, i've made something out of it. My days spent there will never end. I'm becoming addicted threw abit. I never won't to leave. So i close my eyes and try to think of the words that might come by. A shoke runs down my spine, as i go of into my own place. There i'll find it, after my eyes have closed. I got sucked back in, and i've found a face. A reflection of myself. I melt strait threw him, as his hand slips in mine. I'll never leave this place. Tada!!!!!! wooooo!!!!! lol I love the title..What do you think?
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	May 13th, 2006 at 07:06am I actually love it. Honestly. I'm impressed. Not too metaphorical or anything but still beautiful.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 13th, 2006 at 02:38pm I like it.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 13th, 2006 at 02:39pm Inari: I like it. Me too. nods
Mrs. Lee Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1428	May 14th, 2006 at 01:34am Now that i have read it again..It doesn't look and sound all that great
clark GSBitch Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047	May 14th, 2006 at 02:09am Kerplunk_Girl: Now that i have read it again..It doesn't look and sound all that great It's good. Because. Ella loved it So did I, it's beautiful
charmishgirl Geek Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 315	May 14th, 2006 at 02:44am Awesome!!
Mrs. Lee Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1428	May 14th, 2006 at 03:35am awww thanks i am trying to write more, -thinks-
x:MaDi:x Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 426	May 14th, 2006 at 03:55am that was pretty cool I like the name too its good
Mrs. Lee Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1428	May 14th, 2006 at 06:39am lol, i wrote it for my story on her, the girls name is cali. The rights of cali.. Get it haha
Babi Kid Rachy King For A Couple Of Days Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4512	May 14th, 2006 at 07:13am Ohmy. Very good.

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