What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 12th, 2006 at 01:18pm Behind those clods, a golden sun. Forget that behind that eternal darkness reigns.
Wrath twisted and entwined with frustration
Swept across her lips like a thunderstorm,
Striking upon mellow, loving touches.
Bitter acid flooded the reflections of her soul
With all the polluted water on the bottom.
It all stirred, mixed and surfaced.
Regrets then swept through her like a wind
Bringing heart-clutching remorse along,
Which hurt his concern-reflecting orbs.
Those multicolored gems of sapphire shades
Glowed with sorrow in the radiant light
Of the grief illuminating her eyes.
Misdirected outbursts did in a way define her
And he always fond himself going to far,
Ending up outside the eye of her storm.
But once they found the way back to tranquility
A golden sun with rays of their strong love
Shined ever on, no matter what.
I hope you did understand that. If not I’d be happy to explain.
Please leave a comment and be honest. Thank you.
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Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | May 12th, 2006 at 01:20pm Awwwwwhhh...
It's so prettiful... *curls into sleepy poetic ball and holds poem* |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 12th, 2006 at 01:27pm Aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Gosh, now that's so so cute!
*stares in awe* |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 12th, 2006 at 01:35pm Love the images in that. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 12th, 2006 at 01:47pm Thank you, my poetic faerie-darlings. 
That really means a lot to me. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 12th, 2006 at 03:27pm That was quite prettyful.  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 14th, 2006 at 09:56am *bows* Thank you, dear. |