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Bamf!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1763 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:50pm Stop yelling at me!
I did nothing to you!
You're always trying to control me.
You don't even care.
I'm so sorry!
Please forgive me!
I do I do.
I promise.
Friends forever....
Friends forever,
Is that what you think?
Obviously not,
If you want to shatter this relationship.
Over and over,
Twists and turns.
You give me headaches,
And an upset stomach.
Our friendship is a roller coaster.
Constantly on the move.
You never know what is coming next,
Love and happiness, or hate and rage.
Will this ever be fixed?
Or will you just leave it shattered.
If it is fixed will it stay fixed?
Or simply be a fluke?
Friends forever meant something to me.
Obviously nothing to you.
Only memories that will gather dust.
In the back of your mind.
From playgrounds, to make-up.
Crushes, to gossip.
Best friends are there for each other
Through thick and thin.
Silly little bickering fights,
over absolutely nothing.
Make up in two seconds,
and hug as a sign of forgiveness.
Will this ever heal?
Will we ever once be whole again?
Or shall we throw it in a hole.
And bury it with the remaining memories.
Stop yelling at me!
I did nothing to you!
You're always trying to control me.
You don't even care.
I'm so sorry!
Please forgive me!
I do I do.
I promise.
Friends forever....
Our friendship is like a roller coaster,
You never know what's going to happen.
Friends forever means something to me.
I hope it means something to you too. |
Bleach
Rotting On Here
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 47505 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:53pm omg that was so good! 
its not exactly like my friends relationship but she does get pissed easily
and the truth is i wish i had another friend
i might right my first poem abou that |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:55pm Our friendship is a roller coaster.
Constantly on the move.
You never know what is coming next,
Love and happiness, or hate and rage.
From playgrounds, to make-up.
Crushes, to gossip.
Best friends are there for each other
Through thick and thin.
I loved these parts!
As you already know, I relate to this poem so much. It's wonderful. Keep writing. <3 |
Bamf!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1763 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:55pm Thank you. ^_^ |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:55pm You're welcome! ^_^ |
marti lives on.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 39 | May 12th, 2006 at 10:56pm =)
That was wonderful.
Great job. |
Mikelvr
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2356 | May 12th, 2006 at 11:05pm That's very great! :] |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | May 13th, 2006 at 07:09am Panagiotakos.<3:Our friendship is a roller coaster.
Constantly on the move.
You never know what is coming next,
Love and happiness, or hate and rage.
From playgrounds, to make-up.
Crushes, to gossip.
Best friends are there for each other
Through thick and thin.
I loved these parts!
As you already know, I relate to this poem so much. It's wonderful. Keep writing. <3 |
Bamf!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1763 | May 13th, 2006 at 02:03pm ^_^ Thanks! |
Bored To Death
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1182 | May 13th, 2006 at 06:21pm 'Love and happiness, or hate and rage'
I love that line |
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206 | May 13th, 2006 at 06:25pm That was great, Sadie.
Good job.  |
Bamf!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1763 | May 13th, 2006 at 06:27pm Pepperpot.:That was great, Sadie.
Good job. THanks Michelle. ^_^ |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 14th, 2006 at 10:15am That’s real good. Nicely put, and so easy to relate to. Good job!  |
