My Mind's Ear (lyrics)

Spending my time alone and
thinking about your voice
there is no reason I am
here it seems I have no
choice

Does it matter to you
Now whisper to me
your thoughts
of love of
games that you
played me a fool for

I need you anyhow
and the reason is because
you're in my blood, in my viens
and I can't get you out
but I want you
so I keep you
in my mind's ear

It's Okay.

It's crap and I know it. It is kind of a metal tune. Suggestions?