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Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 15th, 2006 at 11:56am That's cool. Kind of different.
imtwasidwelya Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357	May 15th, 2006 at 11:57am I did not like the subject of this one.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 15th, 2006 at 12:10pm Teh Coolest Mohican....: Trunks <3: \m/ I forgetted...what does that mean? >.< It's 'forgot'. Had to correct that. Anyway, the poem is ok. The flow could be better and so could your choice of word and the way you put them together be. But overall it’s ok. Nicely done.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 15th, 2006 at 12:15pm It's ok. Or, it’s ok if your native language isn’t English. =P
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 15th, 2006 at 02:02pm imtwasidwelya: I did not like the subject of this one. Probably because you are jealous that you can't write something fabulous like all of Godfrey's poems.. Great job hunny!
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 15th, 2006 at 02:05pm Teh Coolest Mohican....: Panagiotakos.<3: imtwasidwelya: I did not like the subject of this one. Probably because you are jealous that you can't write something fabulous like all of Godfrey's poems.. Great job hunny! :O thanks! You're welcome!
the_feeling_isn't_fear Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 201	May 15th, 2006 at 02:05pm hmm....

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