I Couldnt Think Of I Title (suggestions for one?)

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Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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May 15th, 2006 at 02:58pm
(i dont even know wether i posted this right but whatever)


Each smile, each look,
That says more than you think.
Photos she took,
And the pages smeared with ink,
From the tears she’s cried
When she sees’s him with her.
For the times she’s sighed,
He’s her unseen cancer.
Mental bruises,
From his twisted mind games.
Witch she loses,
Her worlds now up in flames.
Dark make up bleeds,
Her prospects looking grim,
He’s what she needs,
As she will always love him.
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King For A Couple Of Days
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May 15th, 2006 at 02:59pm
That's pretty cool.
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May 15th, 2006 at 03:08pm
its good
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King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
May 15th, 2006 at 03:31pm
It could flow a little better but I like it.
Oh, and btw, I think you mean ‘which’ and not ‘witch’.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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May 15th, 2006 at 03:44pm
thanks for that! i did mean which, damn spell checker Razz
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Mibba
May 15th, 2006 at 04:01pm
Thought so ^^ Hey, no problem.
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