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 | May 15th, 2006 at 05:27pm Her heart breaks,
Every time she hears my name.
I shed tears,
Every time I see her face.
With her, I used to be so happy,
My world was colourful.
But now, all I can think of,
Is how I ended what we had,
And how much I miss her now.
My world was black and white,
Until the day that I met her.
From then on, my world was colourful,
Red for love,
Blue for sadness,
White for peace,
Yellow for joy,
Green for passion,
Orange for faith,
And pink for hope.
Then one day, my world crashed down.
Our love suddenly took a turn for the worst,
And slowly, the colours started to fade.
First pink,
Then orange,
Then green,
Then yellow,
Then white,
Then bue,
Then red.
Red was the last to go.
It showed how long I held on to her.
How long I tried to get her back.
Then, finally, it faded, and it was gone.
Once more my world is black and white,
And both our hearts are broken. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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 | May 15th, 2006 at 06:24pm Clever use of the colors. The whole "Red was the last to go.
It showed how long I held on to her. " was cool. |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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| May 15th, 2006 at 06:36pm [Flawless Error]:Clever use of the colors. The whole "Red was the last to go.
It showed how long I held on to her. " was cool.
Thank you. |
It Had to Be You.
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Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:30pm Such a compelling and rich poem. The wording and phrasing was very original and Lisa luffs choo. <3
GREAT JOB! |
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| May 15th, 2006 at 07:31pm Panagiotakos.<3:Such a compelling and rich poem. The wording and phrasing was very original and Lisa luffs choo. <3
GREAT JOB!
heh heh 
Thanks.. O_o I guess. |
It Had to Be You.
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Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:32pm Tre Cool's Daughter:Panagiotakos.<3:Such a compelling and rich poem. The wording and phrasing was very original and Lisa luffs choo. <3
GREAT JOB!
heh heh
Thanks.. O_o I guess.  You're welcome.  |
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Posts: 112 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:44pm Love it. Makes me sad though, it sounds exactly like me. |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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| May 15th, 2006 at 07:45pm xx_crazyeyes_xx:Love it. Makes me sad though, it sounds exactly like me.
Thank you. =]
Came straight from the heart, so I can understand if it does. =] |
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Posts: 55 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:49pm aaaaaaawwwwwww so sad i love it *tears* |
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| May 15th, 2006 at 07:54pm srs9098:aaaaaaawwwwwww so sad i love it *tears*
-hugs-
Don't cry. =]
There's enough water on earth without you giving it more. =P
@_@ |
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| May 15th, 2006 at 08:12pm awesome! |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
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| May 16th, 2006 at 06:00pm *Eat Tré`s Shoe*:awesome!
O_o
Really?
Wow, thanks! ^_^ |
