Surreptitiously Romantic

Board index - Your poetry

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Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 15th, 2006 at 06:34am Okay, so i'm not exactly a poet by trade, but I dabble. Maybe some feedback? Surreptitiously Romantic Opaque sky crashing into a welcoming fog This is truly a melodramatic exit Always you would stand & gaze Eyes glassy with a frozen stare It’s much more intense when the truth can be seen There are no words suitable No actions fit To depict the violent infatuation in those circles of Severe colour Mere conversation is utterly inept in the portrayal Of actual feeling Faraway glances into distant longing is truth Truth being a painful momentary look Forever classically tragic
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 15th, 2006 at 06:36am I really loved it I had this amazing feeling when I read it... I luff it.
Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 15th, 2006 at 06:39am wow, thankyou. that actually means a whole lot coming from you :]
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 15th, 2006 at 06:59am That's beautiful. I love it.
Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 15th, 2006 at 07:29am :]
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 15th, 2006 at 10:15am That was really pretty. So cute.
Meski Addict Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	May 15th, 2006 at 10:26am Very nice OLÉ OLÉ!!!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 15th, 2006 at 03:33pm That was AWESOME. I loved it.
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 15th, 2006 at 03:37pm [Flawless Error]: That was AWESOME. I loved it.
spill_no_sick Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: - Posts: 8588	May 15th, 2006 at 08:58pm I won't comment too much because, unlike most poets here, that didn't suck huge grey hairy elephant balls that was actually good, and you actually know what poetry is so thank you for that now this forum has 0.2% actual good poetry
Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 16th, 2006 at 02:26am thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou
killing loneliness Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 572	May 16th, 2006 at 02:43am it's pretty good
Mrs. Lee Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1428	May 16th, 2006 at 02:54am Pretty good, your better then me
B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105	May 16th, 2006 at 04:10am thats lovely
Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 17th, 2006 at 06:00am thanks
x:MaDi:x Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 426	May 17th, 2006 at 06:16am cute and pretty sums it up
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 17th, 2006 at 09:31am ^Yes it does.

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