Making Sense Was So 1950s

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Inari
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Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 10:07am
Another one of my nonsensical ones.

Suburban bi-pass history and the scent's still on my hands.
But ruby shades of faerie reveries could always clear the
migrane of memories dampening my mind with past ordeals.
Star-split rainbow colour pieces. The medicine for my mind.
I'll lose myself in hybrid illusions because the impossible
always existed to those brave enough to dream it did.

And I can lose the past in the present. Disillusionment
is beauty drowned within platinum candyfloss clouds.
Silver linings are too clichéd in modern contexts anyway.
Metropolitian textures replaced for something deeper
than spirituality, something more sensual than affection.

Ragdoll pasttimes were always much sweeter to abandonment.
And spring memoirs leak onto whispered cinnamon leaves,
scrapbook diaries of nonsensical rapture bound with secrets.
Delicate tales of enlightenment were never meant to be heard
through the soft summer sighs of the autumn wind.
And random flashes of poetry were never meant to be art.
But I'll state each line with bold determination.
Because no one ever said that alluring beauty was ever found
within the confines of stereotypical definitions anyway.
rollerpig
GSBitch
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May 17th, 2006 at 10:24am
WOW. That was ama-zing.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 10:27am
Surprised

Very Happy

Thankeee!!!!!

Kiss
Peter Petrelli
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May 17th, 2006 at 10:53am
I love it. I was going to quote the whole 3rd stanza as my favourite lines, but I decided to do this instead;

Shocked

Laughing

Retard
What's in a name?
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 11:11am
Up

What? I have no praises left, I’ve used them all.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 11:12am
Kiss

Thank you, my poetic cupcakes. Very Happy
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 11:16am
Awwww.... that was beautiful. Smile

But, then again, everything you write is. Wink
Inari
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Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 11:28am
Thank you, angel.

Kiss
Inari
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Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 01:37pm
Teh Coolest Mohican....:

Wink Wink I WONDER where I've read this before. xD


I wonder. Very Happy
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 03:08pm
You know, I think that (if even possible) you may be getting better and better. Very Happy
Reading that me all giddy inside. XD
Inari
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Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 04:36pm
Wow thank you [Flawless Error].
Kiss
Eliana Rampage
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May 17th, 2006 at 04:42pm
Shocked

I love you. o_o;
*walks away, shocked and frozen from the Pwn of the poem*

o___o;;; *can't move*
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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May 18th, 2006 at 10:11pm
goodSmile.
Misanthropist
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May 18th, 2006 at 10:50pm
TreCoolistsogeil:
WOW. That was ama-zing.
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