Letters To Franklin

Letters to Franklin


Turn my life around,
So it seems all upside down.
I don't know.
What i was thinking.
Do i see the ground?
As my life is sinking.

What gets threw your day?
Do you wish you could get away?
Make sure it lasts,
as each day goes past.
It will go fast.

A long awaited dream.
Forever it had seemed.
It's right infront of you.
Whatever you wanna do.
Doesn't look so far way.

What gets threw your day?
Do you wish you could get away?
Make sure it lasts,
as each day goes past.
Won't it go fast.

So, where will i be now?
I'll find my way some how.
Would it take forever?
Oh, oh.

Good? I hope it is

This is a very good poem, hun. I'm really picky though and I don't like the "wanna". I don't know, it just seems out of place. So next time, use "want to".

I still loved the poem though, no doubt about it.

hey thats good!

thanks, i don't know why i say i wanna. If it was in a song, i wouldn't say it "I want to" I would say " i wanna" But then again i'm just Aussie. Haha