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Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 19th, 2006 at 03:48pm This is a short poem about and inspired by we_found_the_duck's amazing story Distance. Kind of random. Lol. He was always the most beautiful teenage fuck-up. Tragically infatuating. Poisonous intrigue. Draw close for a taste and he'd stain your lips with sin. Yet he'd always try to make things better although reputation would trip him into jaded routines with scraped knees and curses, broken baby-doll hearts and feminine retorts. Piercing misconceptions of who he really was. A stumbling youth who was always persistant in trying. Think with lust. Respond with desire. It wasn't always the best methodology of life but it got him this far and it would get him so much further. Life was an adventure tried and tested. And love was a heroine needle in his vein. He never realised how wrong he was.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 19th, 2006 at 03:50pm Awwww, that's really awesome Only criticism, I might get rid of the 'And' in the line 'And love was a heroine needle in his vein.' But otherwise I love it.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 19th, 2006 at 03:51pm Yaaaay! I'm not perfect! lol. Thanks, honey!!!!
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 19th, 2006 at 03:53pm poem ---> <----- me Hell yeah, I'm snogging your poem.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 19th, 2006 at 03:56pm I lurve it. <3
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 19th, 2006 at 03:57pm snowcherry: poem ---> <----- me Hell yeah, I'm snogging your poem. You're definately one crazy poet, angel. Thank you, my poetic cupcakes!!!!
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 19th, 2006 at 04:03pm Inari: snowcherry: poem ---> <----- me Hell yeah, I'm snogging your poem. You're definately one crazy poet, angel. Well, you know.... It's your poems that make me do that.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 19th, 2006 at 04:13pm snowcherry: Well, you know.... It's your poems that make me do that. Lol. Maybe I should stop writing poems like that then. Otherwise my work will get slobbered on.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 19th, 2006 at 04:17pm Inari: snowcherry: Well, you know.... It's your poems that make me do that. Lol. Maybe I should stop writing poems like that then. Otherwise my work will get slobbered on. stops snogging your poems And now..... you can write more.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	May 19th, 2006 at 04:23pm Pfft. Love it.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 19th, 2006 at 04:23pm snowcherry: stops snogging your poems And now..... you can write more. Thank you, angel.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 19th, 2006 at 04:27pm You're welcome. Anything for you.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 19th, 2006 at 05:05pm international_idiot: Awwww, that's really awesome Only criticism, I might get rid of the 'And' in the line 'And love was a heroine needle in his vein.' But otherwise I love it. I like it a lot, it's really cool.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 19th, 2006 at 05:49pm amazing!!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 20th, 2006 at 12:54pm Thank you, everyone! MWAH!

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