Concrete Hearts and Faded Dreams

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imtwasidwelya
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May 21st, 2006 at 10:06am
Are you feeling depressed and angry?

That could be the reason you wrote it.
Inari
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May 21st, 2006 at 10:07am
Death and disaster, all willing to destroy people
All part of life's mystical plan
Evilly plotting human's demise
All for concrete hearts and faded dreams.


That verse rocks.

It's good, darling.
imtwasidwelya
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May 21st, 2006 at 10:12am
Happy birthday yesterday!
snowcherry
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May 21st, 2006 at 10:29am
Inari:
Death and disaster, all willing to destroy people
All part of life's mystical plan
Evilly plotting human's demise
All for concrete hearts and faded dreams.


That verse rocks.

It's good, darling.


*nods*

I agree.
imtwasidwelya
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May 21st, 2006 at 10:31am
A book you may enjoy:

Good Hope Road by Lisa Wingate
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In times like you describe in your poem hope can be found.

Sometimes I feel like an observer and I write poems like that one, but mostly I do when I am depressed and angry.
Dehren McGhengland
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May 21st, 2006 at 12:53pm
snowcherry:
Inari:
Death and disaster, all willing to destroy people
All part of life's mystical plan
Evilly plotting human's demise
All for concrete hearts and faded dreams.


That verse rocks.

It's good, darling.


*nods*

I agree.


As do I. It was great!
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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May 21st, 2006 at 03:13pm
^^^ I Also agree!! [love your ava btw]
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