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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:10pm i look into the mirror and wipe away my tears
is this just a dream or am i really here
is this pain im feeling just another form of love
why have you left me all alone when you promised
id never be the one you hurt
i sit and look at the photographs
and read over your words
is this just an obsession or
is this what they call love
i lye here slowly crying myself to sleep
i live through every second of the day
just to hear you speak
but your words never last and the moments over to quick
i live through every day
just trying to forget
every text, every email
all the silent phone calls
i was hurt and you weren’t there
i just lay drowning in my own tears
holding on so tightly to only part of you i have left
this must be an obsession it couldn’t possibly be love
if im so forgotten
and feel so alone..
how can you say im the one you love
how can you say everything’s just perfect
..pretty as a picture yet as broken as a mirror
i still wait here until the day
i hold your hand again
the tears still rolling down my face
waiting for you to wipe them away |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:15pm pretty as a picture yet as broken as a mirror
I loved that.
It was good. |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:19pm Inari:pretty as a picture yet as broken as a mirror
I loved that.
It was good. What I was going to say, exactly. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:25pm thanks i wasnt sure if that line fitter but you like it so ill leave it in xx |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:34pm Sophie! 
It's good. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:38pm arg! u know my name sowwie me not be sure who you be sowwie :S but thanks |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:49pm Gosh.... that was so sad!  |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:51pm snowcherry:Gosh.... that was so sad! mhm yep sad but true tis just how me feels ah maybe one day he will rememeber that im still here |
*they_call_me Ri*
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:54pm Vita-Koolaid:Inari:pretty as a picture yet as broken as a mirror
I loved that.
It was good. What I was going to say, exactly. that was the best line i ever heard...very nice  |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 20th, 2006 at 04:54pm teh_spoon:snowcherry:Gosh.... that was so sad! mhm yep sad but true tis just how me feels ah maybe one day he will rememeber that im still here
awww.... *hugs* |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 20th, 2006 at 05:10pm snowcherry:teh_spoon:snowcherry:Gosh.... that was so sad! mhm yep sad but true tis just how me feels ah maybe one day he will rememeber that im still here
awww.... *hugs* thanks hun *huggles tightly* |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 20th, 2006 at 06:16pm teh_spoon:arg! u know my name sowwie me not be sure who you be sowwie :S but thanks
=O
You talk to me on msn sometimes.
But it's okay. |
GD Addicts Anonymous
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5896 | May 20th, 2006 at 09:03pm I love it! It sounds just like what I've been going through with my ex boyfriend lately. |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 21st, 2006 at 12:07am i lye here slowly crying myself to sleep
i live through every second of the day
just to hear you speak
but your words never last and the moments over to quick
i live through every day
just trying to forget
^Aww hun. 
I hope everything is okay.
I loved the poem! |
FrankFuckingIero
Jackass
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1015 | May 21st, 2006 at 12:11am Because I have a short attention span, I couldn't be bothered reading all of it. The 1st few paragrapgs I read were beautiful though. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 21st, 2006 at 05:52am It Had to Be You.:i lye here slowly crying myself to sleep
i live through every second of the day
just to hear you speak
but your words never last and the moments over to quick
i live through every day
just trying to forget
^Aww hun.
I hope everything is okay.
I loved the poem!
thanks everythings not alright
but i supose ill get through it
thanks everyone else too |
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206 | May 21st, 2006 at 12:44pm pretty as a picture yet as broken as a mirror
^ I loved that line.
Overall, it was great.  Well done! |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 225 | May 21st, 2006 at 03:17pm i still wait here until the day
i hold your hand again
the tears still rolling down my face
waiting for you to wipe them away
i LOVE that bit. and yes... it needed to be in caps!! |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | May 21st, 2006 at 03:33pm thankies much appricitaed  loving the caps |
