Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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Posts: 225 | May 21st, 2006 at 04:00pm I can't make my mind up wether i like this or not. So ill ask you lot.
Who is this person?
This person I loath being.
As I wish away the world,
With twisted smiles,
And staring eyes.
My tears of insanity,
Falling under the stars.
Broken hearts bleeding on,
And darkness in my sunken eyes.
It’s a fiery explosion,
That burns my insides,
Destroying my soul,
Along with my mind.
White light flows,
Across the perfect silence,
Till i'm gone,
Till i’m just a faded memory. |
imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 21st, 2006 at 10:23pm I don't like this poem!
I am familiar with this feeling though: "Who is this person?
This person I loath being. " Post Traumatic Stress Disorder is horrid and it is not curable. |
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Posts: 1958 | May 21st, 2006 at 10:26pm ...
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Wow.
I'm generally not blown away by anything anymore, I'm not a bad person, (I don't think I am), but after reading so many books, all my tears were wasted upon them, since I generally never read any good poems...
I thought at first this'd be a cliched poem subject but...wow...that's incredible. That's one of the best things I've read in a long time.
Excellent job, fellow poet. 
--Eli |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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Posts: 225 | May 22nd, 2006 at 01:54am thanks! it means alot you think that. |
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 | May 22nd, 2006 at 12:57pm XxBillieOwnsXx:...
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Wow.
I'm generally not blown away by anything anymore, I'm not a bad person, (I don't think I am), but after reading so many books, all my tears were wasted upon them, since I generally never read any good poems...
I thought at first this'd be a cliched poem subject but...wow...that's incredible. That's one of the best things I've read in a long time.
Excellent job, fellow poet.
--Eli
From looking at the first line I expected some cliché crap but yeah ^
What Eli said. It was absolutely incredible. |
Inari
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Posts: 2538 | May 22nd, 2006 at 01:00pm I like that.
Really beautiful imagery in it. |
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| May 22nd, 2006 at 02:39pm That's awesome. |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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Posts: 225 | May 22nd, 2006 at 04:44pm ^^^! wow im so glad you all like it |
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| May 22nd, 2006 at 04:58pm Pretty mediocre.
My tears of insanity,
Falling under the stars.
Broken hearts bleeding on,
And darkness in my sunken eyes.
^Didn't like that. |
