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twistedmind999
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 16 | May 24th, 2006 at 08:58am She didn't need any gun,
She didn't need any knife,
But using two quick words,
She ended his whole life... |
-Falling-Star-
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2 | May 24th, 2006 at 09:01am helooooooo nice poem totally loving it lol |
~tre's_lost_nut~
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2504 | May 24th, 2006 at 09:03am nice one.  |
Jay Tee
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Posts: 26777
  | May 24th, 2006 at 09:04am Its like Soldier Side (Intro)!
I could imagine it now...
She didn't need any gun,
She didn't need any knife,
But using two quick words,
She ended his whole life...
BANG
*insert killer guitar riff*
etc. etc. etc. |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 24th, 2006 at 09:10am Extreamly short but I like that little bit.
Could have been a great part of a longer poem, yeah? |
Kyna
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 435 | May 24th, 2006 at 09:45am That's horrible! I feel so sad for him. I hope that he realizes his life really isn't over and he finds happiness and true love after going through that. |
mikeluvva
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 484 | May 24th, 2006 at 10:10am thats amazing. short but sweet, well not exactly sweet but its still good |
Too Much Eyeliner
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1297
| May 24th, 2006 at 10:22am Two Words: We're Over.
Or: We're Through.
Something like that.
Or it could have been Bye Bye. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 24th, 2006 at 02:45pm That's three words actually 
It was as good as a poem of that length can be, I guess.. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 24th, 2006 at 02:50pm What's in a name?:Extreamly short but I like that little bit.
Could have been a great part of a longer poem, yeah? |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 225 | May 24th, 2006 at 03:56pm guessing the words were good bye? its awesome! so short yet so powerful! |
Meski
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
| May 24th, 2006 at 04:00pm thats short but good |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 24th, 2006 at 04:11pm Pretty good
really short 
but pretty cool |
