Kyna
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 435 | May 24th, 2006 at 04:11pm I can't eat from allergies
I can't eat from memories
If I eat it makes me feel sick
this tells me I need help quick
but if I force myself now and then
I eat something to relieve the pain
it gives me enough to sustain
it hurts so bad
give me a name |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 24th, 2006 at 04:18pm I like that
it was ok
short, but a good try  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 24th, 2006 at 04:35pm Sorry, but I didn't really like it. The rhyme was forced and sounded bad, and the words you used weren't that great. |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 24th, 2006 at 04:40pm [Flawless Error]:Sorry, but I didn't really like it. The rhyme was forced and sounded bad, and the words you used weren't that great.
I’m sorry but I have to agree.
I’m convinced you can do so much better.  |
