Hearts Smashed By The Boy/Girl Thing

Author	Message
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 24th, 2006 at 03:41pm She sits alone, Confused and unloved. Watching his every move, She's hypnotized. She cannot sleep, For thoughts of him, Keep her tears falling, Staining her pillow. She's getting hurt, He can't see it, In her eyes, He's pure perfection. She can't take it, This mixed up feeling, Warping her mind, Now nothing makes sense. She's falling down, Though icy air, Spreads her arms, And closes her eyes. She waits for the crash, The sign that her pain, Is complete. It’s all over now. It’s over now...
B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105	May 24th, 2006 at 03:45pm Oh I like that nice job
Maiku's Kind Ghost King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2102	May 24th, 2006 at 03:46pm DARK..I LIKE THAT
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 24th, 2006 at 03:50pm ^^ Thank you!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 24th, 2006 at 04:40pm I suppose it's good, but it didn't seem terribly original to me. Might try some metaphors next time? :]
darkuredi Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 207	May 24th, 2006 at 04:45pm Damn... I like it - I like it a lot.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 25th, 2006 at 01:58am thank you for your comments! critsim noted for next time
clark GSBitch Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047	May 25th, 2006 at 02:30am I like it.

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