Dead End Girl
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Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | May 24th, 2006 at 07:28pm Done quickly...
I had some pent-up anger <3.
But it will help with some songs...
RAWRS?!
I've missed the gun
And I'm too far behind
Shoot me in the heart
I'd like to keep my mind
Heart Apocalypse
Destroyed it in the wake
So unnoticed
And I know it's way too late
A step behind the leaders
And lions on my back
I'm getting out of here
Before I get off track
Heart Apocalypse
Destroyed it in the wake
So unnoticed
And I know it's way too late
I can't stop thinking about this
I'm lost to your desire
Kill me now with my misery
And set my soul afire
Heart Apocalypse
Destroyed it in the wake
So unnoticed
And I know it's way too late |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 24th, 2006 at 08:07pm Great.  |
Toxic Narcotic
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 102
Gender: Female
Posts: 3750
| May 24th, 2006 at 08:18pm that was awesome!!!!!!!! |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 25th, 2006 at 03:20am You have become one of my favourite poets here
"I've missed the gun
And I'm too far behind
Shoot me in the heart
I'd like to keep my mind"
^That requires thought, and I'm glad you put your mind into it when writing, not only your soul.
However, the first line of the following stanza kind of messed up the flow.
"I can't stop thinking about this
I'm lost to your desire
Kill me now with my misery
And set my soul afire" |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 25th, 2006 at 03:41am I really liked it It was awesome well done |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 25th, 2006 at 06:59am You’re a good songwriter even though I usually don’t like your writing stile.
I like this one however. And what Ella said about you using your head when writing is what I really like about this creation. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 25th, 2006 at 08:02am You know, I'm not even going to bother picking a favourite part since it is all so beautiful. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 25th, 2006 at 08:29am I agree, you're seriously becoming an uber poet  |
