Dolphin

Author	Message
Kyna Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 435	May 23rd, 2006 at 11:35pm A task is a mission to keep me giong forward here's a hint will I break this current if I keep swimming toward it or will I get to safety faster if I swim with the flow and reach for higher ground to walk on and steer clear of the flood to move like a dolphin but go the opposite direction they can stay there that is their home I am shorebound that's my task I am headed for the shore and my mission to help others reach it
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 24th, 2006 at 02:59pm It was good, only you might want to add some form of punctuation to it. It was very hard to read.
Kyna Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 435	May 24th, 2006 at 05:13pm [Flawless Error]: It was good, only you might want to add some form of punctuation to it. It was very hard to read. Punctuation I shall add to my next poem.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 25th, 2006 at 08:28am But it had a sweet idea to it. Uh huh. Pretty good.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	May 25th, 2006 at 08:40am Like it.
Escaped Mental Patient Jackass Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1708	May 25th, 2006 at 11:16am good.....I like it

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