Good morning, dreadful night.
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| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451  | Weird structure? Intentional Strangely built sentences? Intentional Crazy grammar? Intentional Now read.  Good morning, dreadful night. Dark. Light. Closed eyes open. Death. Life Inhale and choke. A Shadow Moving Closer and further away As I run The streetlamps Splashes puddles of light In this dark realm. I cannot see, I cannot speak. The air gets caught in my throat, Still every breath claws both lungs While needles of fear taunt my freighted heart. The circle is spinning as I flee, If not I am the one who sprints astray. Dead ends increases rapidly by the time They fade away into nothing once more. A ray cuts through the entire world And I tumble out of my obscure universe. I hit the ground as I fall down onto my bed, Snatched from my nightmare by the rising sun. Dawn Morning One pain traded for another. A nightmare of imagination For a dreadful brand new day. |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Thank you so much, Ellen.  *smiles* Thanks, my wonderful soulmate. That means a lot to me. |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 | Wow. |
| razzledgirl Jackass  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491 | |
| Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225 | |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Thank you all so very much!  I’m so glad you like it because I’m quite happy with it. |
| B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856  | |
| rollerpig GSBitch  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | I like it! |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Inari: Gah! thank you, strawberry cupcake.  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | B.J: Don't hate me! ;__; Thank you x1000 And a big thanks to everyone! |
| B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | What's in a name?: Dont worry I dont actually I just envy you with a passion you and your awesome writing  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | I knew you didn’t actually hate me.  Can’t understand why you envy me though, but thank you. |
| B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | What's in a name?: you know why I envy you cause you [and the rest of the ohsoawesome ones] are so damn good wish I was xP |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | |
| B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | What's in a name?: yah it does >_< I write songs rather then peoms so they dont "flow" as much and also I edit mine constantly so sometimes they end up COMPLETELY different to the originals and thank you |
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