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Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 08:42am This was inspired from What's In A Name?
She made a certain type of syntax which intrigued me to no extent, so I tried it out myself. YOU. PWN.
This is dedicated to Jordyn Snider...Since I felt a huge need to do so...I'm so sorry about last night, honestly, I couldn't possibly continue going on GSB or anything else without ya Jordyn, I'm really really sorry.
Enjoy!
Climatical Beginnings And Augmented Bitter Ends
Filter
out abrasions
and
intake
self elation.
Single minded worries
and troubles so amusing,
it’s no wonder no ones donates sympathy.
Lethal injections are misconceived
to be constant administering of
toxic day dreams;
Impaling dimensions that
once reflected the serene.
The last
peaceful
silence,
the beginning
of
drowned out
screams.
The emerald glowing skies
reflect more than
streaming eyes;
but none take initiative;
none attempt to try.
Grasping sickened theories,
equivalent to deaf goodbyes.
The night
never
fades,
the daemons
never stray,
the familiars
have returned
for
eternities
to play.
Take conscious hold of endings
as fatigue arrives in throngs;
Whisper mindless sufferings
as your sleep
pulls you down…
or lack thereof.
Leading through
a darkness,
deceiving wrong
from right.
Leave the
memories
behind,
you lost
them in
the light.
Cascading
massless
sighs of
defeated
alibis;
Whilst no one returns to hear her diminished lullabies. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 26th, 2006 at 09:30am Awwwww prettiful 
*faints* |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 09:33am Awwh.
*huggles* |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
 | May 26th, 2006 at 09:37am  I didn’t think I could be an inspiration. And I pwn? Me? *dances*
I didn’t even thought you read all my poems since you comment on the so seldom.
That’s an awesome poem.
I really love the syntax.  No seriously, you did very well, dear.
Btw, I read all of yours even if I don’t comment. I don’t feel like repeating myself for every poem you write. xD |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 09:38am Same with me, I don't like commenting since I feel I'll become redundant and stupid. D:
Thank you dear! I can start commenting on yours, 'cept I feel I'll as I said above, or the other way around and have nothing good to say... |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 26th, 2006 at 09:40am You’re welcome, sweetie. You don’t have to comment. It’s fine.  |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 11:40am ;_; But I dunno, I feel bad now XD |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 26th, 2006 at 11:55am Aww *hugs tightly* Don’t feel, bad, hon. You can comment if you want and not comment if you want. It’s up to you, but just don’t feel bad.  |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 11:56am Kay I won't ;D Happy days! |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 26th, 2006 at 11:59am I love it. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 26th, 2006 at 04:08pm That was really great. Panda wants to eat it. XD |
alexalexsuarez!
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 376 | May 26th, 2006 at 06:13pm Beautious!
*huggles poem*  |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | May 26th, 2006 at 06:35pm It's good! |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 26th, 2006 at 06:39pm *shudders* "good" is so bland ;_; Thanks guys! |
alexalexsuarez!
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 376 | May 26th, 2006 at 06:39pm And that's why i said beautious  |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 27th, 2006 at 11:24pm xDD I've never used that word before...wow. o.o |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
 | May 28th, 2006 at 02:25am Magitifical. There. New word for you  And it was Magitifical. |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 28th, 2006 at 05:52am That was amazing, honestly. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 28th, 2006 at 08:19am 
<3 Thanks, guys! |
