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Ahhhh!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1372 | May 28th, 2006 at 12:53pm I need to believe
In something that relieves
The thoughts in my mind
Don't want no religion
Can't stand superstition
It all seems so blind
I don't need a reason
I just dont care
Dont take it as treason
I don't understand
I want to talk freely
And think ideally
Thats whats for me
Don't come with your bibles
I'm not gonna buy those
Not even for free
I don't need a reason
I just dont care
Dont take it as treason
I don't understand
Don't look at me
'cause i dont look like you
Don't talk about me
'cause i don't talk like you
Don't have pity on me
I have pity on you
I feel so confused
When you're all so enthused
I don't see a point
If you were more like me
You'd think it more likely
That i have a point
Burn the book
Burn the book
Burn the book
Before the book burns you |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 28th, 2006 at 12:55pm o_o I really liked that. The whole concept of the poem was well oriented, and the idea was just inspiring for me. I think the flow might have been off a bit, but that doesn't take away from the poem at all. (Or song XD) |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 28th, 2006 at 12:57pm I liked it. You always seem to have a knack of being able to write anti-religion without sounding cliched. |
Meski
Addict
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
 | May 28th, 2006 at 12:58pm I liked it!! |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844 | May 28th, 2006 at 01:01pm really really good,, i like it! |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
 | May 28th, 2006 at 01:23pm international_idiot:I liked it. You always seem to have a knack of being able to write anti-religion without sounding cliched.
*nods*
Oh, and btw, did you ever come up with music for the lyric/poem I wrote? [/off topic] |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 28th, 2006 at 01:52pm That's really interesting. |
Ahhhh!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1372 | May 28th, 2006 at 02:22pm What's in a name?:international_idiot:I liked it. You always seem to have a knack of being able to write anti-religion without sounding cliched.
*nods*
Oh, and btw, did you ever come up with music for the lyric/poem I wrote? [/off topic]
Sorry, no, we passed on it... I really liked it. Liz and Matt did not. I have failed you. |
Ahhhh!
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1372 | May 28th, 2006 at 02:33pm Inari:That's really interesting.
For serious? ... I dont catch on to sarcasm |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 28th, 2006 at 04:01pm Ahhhh!:What's in a name?:international_idiot:I liked it. You always seem to have a knack of being able to write anti-religion without sounding cliched.
*nods*
Oh, and btw, did you ever come up with music for the lyric/poem I wrote? [/off topic]
Sorry, no, we passed on it... I really liked it. Liz and Matt did not. I have failed you.
 The way you wrote that seemed so funny. Sorry, I'm tired.
It's ok, you haven’t failed me. You can always make up some beats/riffs
(whatever you play) yourself if you feel like it. Otherwise, just forget about
it, it’s no big deal. I’m just glad you like it so much.
It makes me happy when people like my poetry/lyrics. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 28th, 2006 at 05:41pm I like that a lot. Definitely liking the structure.  |
