The Tree, The Ax And The Alter

Lawl Eli has a really screwed up title this time.
XD

This was actually a poem we just wrote for...er...Bible class XD I'll just put it that way. I decided to post it to see what yall think of it, so enjoy XD

The Tree, The Ax And The Alter

Anarchy spreads like national viruses;
infectious lack of faith wreaks
intoxication unto masses.
Never shall I surface, in the darkness I remain.

Loyalty refrains from minds
as reality seeps away;
Royalty is forgotten
as divinity is betrayed;
Eradicated, despised,
serenity’s demise.

I fall
unto,
into
these sins,
the devastated
calamities
of your
beloved abyss.

But contempt will crumble,
dynasties will fall;
Abstained reminiscings
will haunt your mind;
Of all you rejected, of all you despised;
Blackened hearts torment your bittersweet lies.

Thrown into your venom;
your hypocrisy,
the deadly poison
you brewed and drank;
Your sorrowful addiction,
the grotesque conclusions
revealed a sand grain left behind;
The single memoir of the diminutive time.

But soon it vanished too;
for mistakes are not erased,
and blasphemy is not forgiven
as easy as you desire;

The foreign bodies from
dead dimensions follow your ideals;
Repulsive, twisted, deformed and demented;
But their conspiracies will lie unveiled.

Outcasted symbology of faith and truth,
lie beneath your nightmares;
Lions devour narcissistic wishes as
their scars scream out disasters.
Dreams but not delusions
sent solely for your purpose;
sent solely to revive you,

to the love that was extinguished,
to the flame that lies between
the shimmering and diminished.

Hand in hand together, we embrace the fleeting minute.

Wow. That was amazing. I really liked this part

Loyalty refrains from minds
as reality seeps away;
Royalty is forgotten
as divinity is betrayed;
Eradicated, despised,
serenity’s demise.

But the whole thing was amazing.

<3 Thanks my friend also wrote it, but she's also a Piano. (OMG PANDA YOU HAVE LIKE AN ALLITERATION BUDDEH...XDDD)

Awesome Real awesome, sweetheart.

Thanks, dear! ^_^

wow, this is so fucking awesome, all your poetry is fucking awesome....

Gah.
You amaze me even more with your poetry.

You are just...
well, you definately are the anti-prose.

<3 Awww Inari dear, you are as well Thanks to all!

Beautiful, really. One of the best I've read here.

O_O

Seriously? Wow I'll tell my friend, she cowrote it so...XD

You continue to amaze me.

xDDD I love you Ella

XxBillieOwnsXx:

xDDD I love you Ella

And I love you back.

XxBillieOwnsXx:

<3 Thanks my friend also wrote it, but she's also a Piano. (OMG PANDA YOU HAVE LIKE AN ALLITERATION BUDDEH...XDDD)

WHAT'S THIS NOW!? XDDD I first read that, and I thought it said Buddha. I was like wtf. BUT YAY ALLITERATION BUDDEH!!!

So on with the poem...one of my favorites of yours, I think. Fave part:

Loyalty refrains from minds
as reality seeps away;
Royalty is forgotten
as divinity is betrayed;
Eradicated, despised,
serenity’s demise.

OMGOMG WTF BUDDHA XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

LMFAO I LOVE YOU.

<3 YAY Thankies Panda!

wow...that was great!!!!

Thanks. ^_^