Um, I don't know what to call it...
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| Sylar Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5703 | It's not finished, I just want to know if it's even good enough to continue on with. So yeah, if you like it say so, if you don't- please give me tips where to go with the ending  Love and lust Hate and disgust Four things that make up life, all so simple Except for one Love is brutal and tender It sends chills down your spine At the same time, hot and wild And often, it’s a lonely walk down a crowded line. Fools attempt to define love Sent from above? Taken by those below? A seed which proceeds to grow? It’s easy to fall in Hard to escape Looked upon as sin Seen as a flimsy concept such as fate |
| Kid_Gates Geek  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289 | |
| Sylar Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5703 | Thanks sweetheart  |
| clark GSBitch  Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047 | I liked that. |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Didn't flow too well, but it was real pretty. I actually really liked it |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921  | international_idiot:Same. I don't know if it was just me, but when I was reading it I imagined that someone was giving a speech or something. Like so the voice in my head was all echoey like a microphone.  Wow, that was pretty hard to understand... |
| Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801  | international_idiot:I'm not the best eprson to be asking, I despise rhyming. o_O Continue. |
| Kurtni Admin  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 | |
| Sylar Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5703 | Thanks guys  |
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