Dreams of a Dead Future Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 17 | May 30th, 2006 at 01:44pm There must be more to life than
Sitting around waiting to die
Something more than mere existence
Or whats written in the stars
But how can I figure out what is real
In a world full of lies
Where's the truth that's been left untainted
By centuries gone by?
Beyond fact and science fiction
Beyond all our explanations
How can we box up something
that defys our imagination?
How can I figure out what is real
In a world full of lies
Where's the truth that's been left untainted
By centuries gone by?
I know it seems this song comes easy
But melodies can be misleading
Just like everything else in this life. |
Kurtni Admin
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289
 | May 30th, 2006 at 01:52pm Short and simple, but it was still good. I think you could have been more vivid at times, but it was fairly good. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 30th, 2006 at 03:16pm I liked it. =]
Side note: Isn't there a song called Fact or Science Fiction? [not accusing you of anything at all, just wondering]  |
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801
 | May 30th, 2006 at 03:27pm I like it, especially the third stanza. I like the way it flowed. |
Dreams of a Dead Future Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 17 | May 30th, 2006 at 05:42pm [Flawless Error]:I liked it. =]
Side note: Isn't there a song called Fact or Science Fiction? [not accusing you of anything at all, just wondering] 
Yeah, when I was writing this I was wondering the same thing, but I didn't both to check it out... but perhaps you're right. |