damaged.. thats what i call it

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[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
[Broken Pretty]
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 572
June 2nd, 2006 at 07:11am
You look at me
You turn away
Your face fills with anger
Those words you say to me
I say back
How does it feel?
Being pushed away around constantly
Yet being told you're beautiful
This will never happen to me
All the emotion is building up inside
Do I need help?
I wouldn't seek it even if I needed it
I’m happy sane
At least I would hope so
So what if I have craving your rip your head off?
That doesn't make me crazy
Everyone goes mental
At least I've been told so
Don't you believe me?
I’m happy sane I only said that 'cause
I’m distressed now
I only just founded out that I’m different
To other kids out there
Will I be with my own kind?
I didn't mean to hurt anyone
Did I harm you?
Do you watch the world pass by?
Without a change to say goodbye
You start to fall
You need to stop
To save yourself
But it's too late
It's all blown away
All gone without you
Leaving you behind
Close to tears

Sorry the world isn't here just for you
You can think it is
Think about someone else
For a change
Please
Strange this world
When I open a book
I look at the stars
And only see the black sky
To put my faith in
The shining tears that run down my face
Fall into the ancient page
I hope I feel better tomorrow
Will tomorrow come fast or slow?
Compared today?
11th Street Kid
King For A Couple Of Days
11th Street Kid
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Gender: -
Posts: 3645
June 2nd, 2006 at 08:58am
Hmmm.. some bits were okay.

To be honest though, I didn't like it that much. Some parts didn't make sense and it wasn't very poetic. Sounded more like a heated speech.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2921

Mibba
June 2nd, 2006 at 02:37pm
*Blue Star*:
Hmmm.. some bits were okay.

To be honest though, I didn't like it that much. Some parts didn't make sense and it wasn't very poetic. Sounded more like a heated speech.
I say aye. Cool
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